The first time I saw her was freshmen year Literature 101 class. With glasses on, she looked quite plain. She always wore her hair up in ponytail or down with a tousled touch, it seemed like either she was a "Virgin Mary" type or a lazy high school girl. There was a thing about how she dressed. Her signature look was sleeveless white shirt with black shorts and flip-flop. Even though she was quite tall, there was something about her that made her look shorter and younger. She had darker skin than others, and I have not ever considered her beautiful before she took off her glasses. Once she shed her glasses because she got the laser surgery, her big doe eyes were revealed and I could see how she understood my mistakes with a good mind.
Hi! I am Yae Lim
ReplyDelete1. This essay is about your friend's first impression by describing her appereance
2. (1) She looked lik a lazy high school girl
(2) She was tall but her dress made her look shorter and younger
(3) She got eye laser surgery and this made her look beautiful
3. I think you miss what she says, what other people say about her
4. I did not have any.
5. I think the writer wants to talk about lesson she learned by describing the experience with her friend's appreance
6. i would like to know what others say about her, and specific events with her.
Hello! I'm SeongYeon. I really enjoyed your writing!
ReplyDelete1. It's about your friend's first impression, which had changed in the end
2. -1Well, She got eye surgery, which affected to her overall look.
-2 Her hair up in ponytail or down with a tousled touch.
-3 The way she dressed made her seem shorter than her actual height.
3. I think you just mentioned A. The overall writing was about describing what your friend looks like.
4. For me, I couldn't understand "Virgin Mary" at first.
5. Maybe, this girl had became your best-friend.
6. I want to know more about her personality, not just her appearance:)