Sunday, November 29, 2015

Kim Tatiana/ Chapter 5 essay. First draft/ Narrative Composition Tue 3 4

An Experience of Kazakh Exchange Student in South Korea


The very first time I met Zarina was in 'Korean language for
foreigners' class last year. She is a very smart person with accurate
manner of speech. And since she is from Kazakhstan we were talking in
Russian a lot and, as a result, it took us a short time to get closer
to each other. But then Zarina returned to her homeland and after some
time she went to Korea again. Now it's her second time here. That's
why I thought it's my chance to interview her and hear about exchange
student's life from the first face.

I started from standard questions to give some background
information about the interviewee. Zarina is 20 years old female who
was born in Temirtau city in Kazakhstan. She is majoring in Korean
culture and philology department in Kazakh National University named
after Al – Farabi. Currently she is an exchange student in South Korea
for this semester.

Obviously, the first question was about the reason she came
here. She confessed that actually she planned to come to Korea and
study here as a regular student, but under some circumstances she
decided to enter the university in Almaty, the capital of Kazakhstan.
But she is just in love with this country. She likes its culture and
language, and she made a lot of friends here whom she doesn't want to
leave.

"Were there any difficulties during preparation for a flight?"
- I asked Zarina. She let out a sigh and answered sadly: "Yes, there
were. Mostly financially because usually an exchange student supposed
to get support from the university he is studying in, but my education
and dormitory fees are paid by Korea. And nobody provides a
scholarship, so I have to find money for living expenses by myself.
The other difficulty was with documents - it took me a long time to
prepare them all. But the most difficult part is about my university
grading system."

She paused, took a deep breath and continued: "Right now I'm
required to listen to 6 lessons for my major. But since I'm in South
Korea right now three of them I have to take here and the other three
will be given as distance-learning courses. And after I come back to
my homeland I will have to take a few exams." She also expressed her
discontent about such a horrible system. "I'm pretty sure that
exchange students from other countries don't have so much pressure.
They are usually required just to take Korean language courses and
that's it."

Then we decided not to pay attention on that depressing topic
and go to the next question. I asked her about the very first
expression right after she went out from the plane. With a big smile
on the face and with happy and cheerful voice Zarina said that she was
really, really happy just because she finally was in Korea. That's it.
look at me for a few seconds and ask me to go on.

I asked her to tell what is the main difference between Korean
and Kazakh people. She was staring thoughtfully somewhere for a while
and then said that it is about a life speed. Because of the crazy
competition Koreans always busy and do everything really fast. In
Kazakhstan there is no such big competition, so everybody relaxed and
don't rush. After Zarina finished she hesitantly looked at me as if
she was not sure is it a good answer or not. I just was thinking if I
should ask her a little bit more about this question, but since I
wanted to get as much information as I can I decided to go to next
question.

The next question is challenging. "What would make Kazakhs
react normally, but make Koreans look askance at you?" – I asked her
with a small excitement because I was really curious what answer the
interviewee would give. She was in real deep thoughts for two or three
minutes. And then she replied for the confidence: "A flash mob. I know
it because I used to participate in the Korean flash mob that what's
called 'Free Hugs'. Kazakh people would react normally – just go and
hug you. But Koreans were a little bit freaked out and asked lots of
silly questions and they couldn't make up their mind whether to hug a
person or not." To be honest, it was such an exceptional answer for
me, so I only mentioned that I would like to participate in this flash
mob, too. And without any further discussion we moved on.

The question was if Koreans are neat people. Zarina's eyes
glistened, I knew this glance: she has a lot to say since she used to
live in the dormitory with one Korean roommate last year. Zarina
narrowed her lids and said that Koreans are doing well with their
personal hygiene, but when it comes to room cleaning... She stopped,
and after a few seconds of silence, she indignantly asked a rhetorical
question about why Koreans are so careless about the mess around them.
I understandingly smirked and reminded her that I know exactly how she
feels. She smirked too.

Then it was time for another challenging question. This
question is my favorite one. I asked here slowly: "In what way Korean
people amaze you?" She sneered ironically and said softly: "I'm not
sure how I should answer this question because people tend to memorize
the negative things first.". I noticed that the word 'amaze' can be
interpreted in a bad way. Right after this she got some ideas for a
respond. First of all, she told she was slightly shocked how easily
Koreans think about the plastic surgery. And also about the fact that
some parents consider the operation as a present. Secondly, she
pointed out that some people turn into hypocrites, probably due to
crazy rhythm of life and a huge pressure from the society.

To switch our mood on something positive, I asked her if we can
learn something from Koreans. But she didn't reply. Then I suddenly
ask her: "It means nothing?" she surprised a lot and we just started
laughing, so ridiculous the situation was. "There are a few. The sense
of purpose. Koreans are really determined and do everything to reach
their goal. And their ability to separate personal life and work," –
she answered quite seriously.

Finally, I asked Zarina to give some advices to students who
wants to come to Korea. She answered without any hesitation: "There's
no need to sit in the library for the whole days. It will be more
productive if you make Korean friends and hang out with them. It will
be more interesting to learn language and culture this way. I'm not
telling that you to forget about studying, but don't spend too much
time for it. But, please, don't idealize South Korea. The majority of
people create some ideals about Koreans and about the country itself
because of Korean Wave. And then these people come to Korea they
become frustrated and angry. But it's only their own fault. It's true
that Korea is a good place to live, but it's just not ideal."

2 comments:

  1. Plan for Revising. Kim Tatiana. Chapter 5.

    1. Since Zarina here only until the end of December I was very glad to her. The thing is that I started the interview really late, so we were talking by Kakao Talk. It was easy and interesting because Zarina is a quick-witted person, her answers were logic and grabbed attention.
    If I could re-do this interview I would do it face-to-face.


    2. I like first 5 paragraphs and last 2 paragraphs. In particularly, I like how a respond for the final question became a conclusion. Also I think it was a good idea to split one big answer on 2 parts (about difficulties during preparation for a flight).

    3. I believe I included all important parts in the essay, so the reader can get not only answers for questions but also create an interviewee’s image.

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  2. Hi I'm Yoo Jin Jeong and this is my peer response.

    1. I liked hearing about Koreans from a foreigner's perspective. I can't say I'm a "perfect" Korean myself, but there are still some things that I don't even notice that someone from a completely different culture can pick out.

    2. I think they were pretty clear.

    3. I'm not sure if there is a direct thesis, because the main point seems to be "what Zarina thinks of Korea and Korean people."

    4. "I'm not sure how I should answer this question because people tend to memorize the negative things first."

    5. I think there are too few direct quotations. There were many indirect quotations that I think would have been more effective as direct quotations.

    6. There are a few grammatical mistakes, such as tense consistencies (you keep changing between past and present) Fixing them will enhance the overall quality of the essay.

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